[And then there she was, back on his mind. Nagisa had to admire her fearlessness a little, even while his stomach knotted watching her stick her hand right in. If she screamed, he wouldn't hear it.
Fortunately, the result looked about as harmless as finger painting. He winced when she took off a piece, then looked away; stupidly, he was already letting her attitude dampen his own enthusiasm and curiosity towards their discovery. He folded his arms and kicked harder at the water beneath him.
Her question calmed him down some. Nagisa didn't have an answer, but he also did.]
I've studied the database a lot, and these don't match the description of anything I read about. In the end, it could be on us to come up with a name.
certainly, i thought about editing that third paragraph
Fortunately, the result looked about as harmless as finger painting. He winced when she took off a piece, then looked away; stupidly, he was already letting her attitude dampen his own enthusiasm and curiosity towards their discovery. He folded his arms and kicked harder at the water beneath him.
Her question calmed him down some. Nagisa didn't have an answer, but he also did.]
I've studied the database a lot, and these don't match the description of anything I read about. In the end, it could be on us to come up with a name.